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Old 03-25-03, 01:08 PM   #1
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It would be great if you guys would look at my site to find problems. Not all the pages are done, but I'd rather fix things now, than after I feel I am finished.
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Old 03-25-03, 11:33 PM   #2
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Really nice work, Scot. I like the colors and the photos are great. I love the menu bar at the top... really creative.

The page has a bit too much text for my taste. I realize this is like the Emperor in "Amadeus" telling Mozart that his opera has "too many notes." Keep in mind that the average agent will just SKIM what you have written, so copy should be brief 'Sam Donaldson-esque' bites of info.

At times the site blurs the lines between a 'buy this show' website and 'about me' website. Thankfully you don't list your favourite bands.

Think about stylizing you text to match the great aestetic to the site...

overall, a 7 out of ten, with potential to be a 10 out of 10. I can't wait to see the end result.


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Old 03-26-03, 11:26 PM   #3
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I like the text. I think it conveys a very clear image of "scot" and it makes ME want to see his show. I have no experience with being an agent so i don't know if it makes me want to hire you but it seems to do the job. I will refrain from further comment until the rest is up. Can't wait for the video.

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Old 04-05-03, 11:45 AM   #4
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Thanks for the feedback everyone who posted here and emailed me. I'm still making changes every single day so, keep checking back.
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